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Monday, October 28, 2013

ICU

On Sunday I woke up at 7:30 AM, took a shower,
ate some cereal, and then drove to the hospital, where I
then got in the elevator and descended quietly to the ICU.
Outside the big wooden doors stood my 6'6'' uncle with his peppered
hair and glasses with lenses like the bottoms of old Coke bottles.
He looked up from his phone, gave me a hug and a kiss, before
we all walked past a sign that alerted us that we were entering a
CLEAN HANDS ZONE and under another that Welcomed us
To Intensive Care Unit 3200. We walked around and around
this deathly silent rotunda, like a sickly merry-go-round,
past the nurses buried in their charts,staring into the rooms where
frail bodies that lay amongst cords and tubes and stiff sheets,
lying still like papier mâché left to dry. From every room the
rhythmic chirping of cardiac monitors could be heard over the
gentle sighing and sleepy breathing of the medical ventilators.
We crept silently into room 3634 where grandma lay in bed,
and her face was pale and her hair looked whiter than normal
and 34 BPM flashed in red on the screen behind her. I bowed
down and she reached up to hug me. Half an hour later they
let the electrodes slither through her veins and the electrical port
nuzzle and nest in her ribs. She slept and dreamed of running again.

2 comments:

  1. The factual, 'prosaic' quality of your prose poem jarringly contrasts the emotions in an ICU. The conclusion lands well.

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  2. I really like the imagery in the poem; it does a very good job of depicting the nauseating, unnatural, feel of the hospital sections and the fragile overworked skin of the sick patients. The overall sickly feel of the poem causes the conclusion to have a very strong, hopeful affect.

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